English Essay SPM - Write an essay ending with "If only I had been more careful, that wouldn't have happened."

Write a story ending with:            
             
          "If only I had been more careful, that wouldn't have happened."

          The sun was about to set. Haziq and I were feeling so excited to watch the scenery at the seaside. Suddenly, I received a call from my mother that asked me to go back home a soon as possible.

          "Haziq, I am sorry, unexpectedly I need to go back home now," I whispered.

          He smiled and nodded his head. I jumped onto my bicycle and cycled toward home. As I arrived home, I was shocked to see a big amount of shoes outside the house. Then I opened the door and went to the living room. As I was entering the room, I noticed that my brothers and sisters looked straight at me.

          "Hello, I feel happy to meet all of you again," I greeted them cheerfully.

          I was feeling exuberant as they were planning to have a picnic at the beach and I was invited to come along with them. That night we slept very late, chattering and bantering in the living room as we were extremely missing each other.

          The new day had came. I observed through the window and noticed the sky was very clear, hoping that the trip would go fine. Then, we gathered around the dining table and were having a breakfast. After that, we prepared ourselves and headed to the beach with two cars.

          "You are so lucky to breathe in fresh air everyday," mentioned Rid, my eldest brother who worked at Kuala Lumpur.

          "That is the reason I am getting more and more healthier," affirmed me, sounding amused.

          My brother and I kept on talking until I was blue in the face but he still continued his talking. As we arrived, I quickly get out from the car and took out the barbecue set. While others were looking at the scenery of the beach with popped out eyes. My brothers and sisters sprinted toward the beach eagerly and jumped into it.

          Meanwhile, I were the only one who need to set up the barbecue set. I went to a small looking shelter, but it looks steady. I set up the barbecue set easily and started to light up the charcoal.

          "The sales pitch sounded good, but there was a lot of hand waving about the price," complained my father, coming from the stall,"so you will need to share your drinks with your beloved brother," said my father, sounds laughing at me.

          "For sure, I will get less quantity of water from my brother," whispered my heart,"he loves to take any opportunities coming on me," I sighed.

          While my father was keeping an eye on my little sister, I kept on observing the roasted chicken, counting times to take it out. All of a sudden I saw a cute white colored cat eating bones near a rubbish bin. I have tried to catch it's eye but it did not work.

          The white-yellow colored tail with thick fur cat made myself keen to look nearly to it. So I decided to go over there. As I was playing happily with the cat, I smell an unwanted smell, it was from out shelter. Then I sprinted toward the barbecue set and noticed the roasted chicken had became burnt chicken. I was upset that I made the trip became worst. If only I had been more careful, that wouldn't have happened.